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Looks like a well executed modification
The floating cam mechanism is intended to make a mechanical hub brake function like the hydraulic one shown below:
With a hydraulic drum brake the force of the fluid is split two ways i.e. 50% right and 50% left regardless of any uneven wear of the two brake shoes. With a floating cam, any uneven loading of the cam should cause it to centre itself between the shoes so that the braking forces are evenly split.
Despite their claim to be the "best", it is possible for a standard Sturmey Archer Elite brake to put all the braking force into only one shoe, the other being effectively redundant. Also, since the leading and trailing shoes wear at different rates this problem will become more evident over time.
I don't think that the Marin pioneers ever used floating cam brakes on their Clunkers. If they had they may have stuck with drum brakes instead of shifting over to cantilevers.
The 'Leleu' floating cam brakes used on the Clelands also had a minimum distance of over 80mm of heat radiating aluminium between the braking surface and the nearest wheel bearing, so no need to 'repack' after a long downhill.
Even with a correctly centering floating cam it will still take time for the shoes to properly bed in and so achieve their maximum braking force. I would also remove a short section of the sealing ring at the bottom of the brake plate, so as to allow any brake dust or water to escape.